First draft blues:”He tested stick glanced set handbrake. feet felt ac — J. Gunnar Grey, Deal Devil, Part One

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First draft blues:"He tested the stick and glanced at the set handbrake. With his feet he felt the accelerator, the brake, the clutch. Backwards, but otherwise just the same, and comforting in a solid, mechanical way. It even smelled right, oil, petrol, lubricated warm metal, and the polished windshield seemed transparent in the night’s silver flood.

J. Gunnar Grey, Deal With the Devil, Part One

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